Like a lost letter she stood for a while
to go the other side of the road..
near me who was lying in a corner of this side….
For moments, it seemed she was the same soul in whose palms seeking fulfillment I search in mine…
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So full of heart and emotion. I give you my congratulation.
A beautiful poem... the words are placed and chosen very well... I loved the lines Like an unaddressed letter I sent my words into the air…. O..stranger! ! ! ! A very impressive write.. I loved it! ! !
You are a great bard! This poem is enriched with figure of speech!
Wow, I enjoyed a lot reading this poem. really very well written. Your thoughts are awesome. I loved it! ! ! ! ! ! keep it up dear friend, Amen! ! ! !
I like this poem. It is a poem filled with compassion and sincere feelings. Humble and simply beautiful. Keep up the good work :))
i think the poem is really good. i like its flow and deep meaning. i like when we should think while reading. so, it seems to be very personal poem. good done work, so, keep it up!
Stay happy n creative always... am speechless for your kind courtesy. warm regards, shahzia...
i found the poem an excellent one, nice thoughts and above all the concept of the poem is extraordinary, and the narration is beautiful, the style is marvellous....its an exquisite piece of art.....the line which i like most is.................. Like an unaddressed letter I sent my words into the air…. O..stranger! ! ! ! .................... thanks...
beautiful and captivating a bit long though.....a shorter rendering is more in vogue now adays.... but if Ms S_B_N has endorsed it....where do i stand great man....i found yer poem mesmerizing and lovely.... cheers sat