Monday, May 25, 2009

Macho Men Comments

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we try to be macho men who very rarely speak
but deep inside we are weak.

weak to the feelings that we have locked up inside.
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Christine Kerr 02 June 2009

Believe I met this character in many men. The ones that are willing to talk to you on the same level which are far and in between, are the real gems. Thanks for sharing.

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Kranthi Pothineni 25 May 2009

Everyone fears but we overcome fear for something good. Even a common man will overcome his fears when the time comes. Nice write.

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so much truth lies in this poem, i' dhave to say it comes form experience..

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a very practical write...yes we pretend to be fearless

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Scott Daniels 25 May 2009

I love this poem. You got the idea across and to be honest it's true to what I feel. Especially 'we always dream of being that knight in shining armour rescuing the maiden and her honor'

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