Wednesday, March 23, 2016

Machines Comments

Rating: 5.0

What can be as strong as this
What can be as powerful as this
Huge monster using its skill
Moving its iron muscles at our will
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Salman Sayeed
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Rajnish Manga 25 March 2016

Nicely articulated poem about the strength and versatility of man-made monstrous machines. Graphic description. Thank you, Salman. I quote a few lines: Without any fatigue working as per our wish It lives to earn its masters bread

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Hey good efforts. Try.

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