Thursday, October 15, 2009

Machinery Comments

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My first poem, Im looking for inspiration, I could use some help or criticism, not spell checked, I just wrote it like 5 minutes ago: D I hope its worth something

I dont want to be a machine,
Water does me good,
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Cody Brewer
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

An excellent poem.....

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

Brilliant piece. loved it. -

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Cody Brewer 15 October 2009

First poem >_____> WHOO? XD

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