Sunday, December 18, 2005

Mabel Momma Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the room
behind the door half closed
the stench taking up the corridor
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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A. Michael Sears 15 January 2006

Ms. DelSanto: I agree a very moving piece. Vivid as well...I could feel the sunshine on the mansions terrace and smell the bouquet. Bravo.

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Gershon Hepner 18 December 2005

A very moving poem. Gershon

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