माँ गंगा
धोती धोती तन धोती माँ
धोती धोती मन धोती माँ
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Tiwari ji, you have written very well about Ganga.Now say something for those who are polluting Ganga maan.
Hum dhanya hain jo Maa Ganga hamare paap dhoti hai, pr humein ise saaf rakhna haihai... Tiwari Ji aapki kavita Maa Ganga Ji k pavitra karyon ka bakhaan krti hai divya ddhaara, Shiva-gamini, Vishnu Prayag or Brahma karmadalika..... Ati pavni Ganga Ji.... Har har gangey.....
Your verse is as crystal clear as River Ganges of India, my friend!
Moving words... Moving Thoughts... Lovely all the way... Salutations Tiwari S D....
संताप तू धोती, पाप भी धोती दीन दरिद्र के श्राप को धोती हरेक मलिन छाप को धोती तू मन के दर्पण धोती माँ..... अति सुंदर प्रस्तुति...वाह :)
It is so pure, strong and loud...Sir you presented the picture very well...I loved the Hindi translation much that that of English... Thanks for sharing..
You make the eternal vision clear and you remove obstacles of life. Great prayer in verse form narrating the greatness of river Ganga. Thanks for sharing.10++
really great one....... rightly described by manga sir It is like a prayer to the holy river MAA GANGA
This is like a divine prayer dedicated to Mother Ganga, which has nurtured our life and civilisation since time immemorial. The poem reflects the sentiments of countless Indians. संताप तू धोती, पाप भी धोती दीन दरिद्र के श्राप को धोती You clean the greed, gluttony, wrath you clean pride, sloth, envy and lie.
Verily, a lovely poem on Ganga river which is the essence of eternity........10
Mother Ganga with her unlimited sacredness washes body, mind and spirit teaching many values of purity. Very beautiful and nicely composed excellent poem shared here. Life becomes sacred on basis of purity. Nicely shared...10
पतित पावनी 'माँ गंगा' के दैवी स्वरुप से परिचित कराती आपकी कविता के बारे में क्या लिखूँ? उचित शब्द नहीं मिल रहे. इस सुंदर रचना के लिये आपका अतिशय धन्यवाद, तिवारी जी. मेरा नमन स्वीकार करें.
The ancient river, the emblem of purity has been worshiped here.A fabulous poem on Mother Ganges.
I like the poem on 'GANGA'. If other poems on GANGA by other authers, kindly let me know.