[Maa* - We]
We, who carved,
the picture of goddes
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a short piece picturing the truthful Goddess..........well written Jamali........sebastine
a very beautiful and powerful write indeed and so truely said that 'We' is that one golden word, which can change anything in this world, this poem reminded me of one of my own poem 'I am still me'....thanks for sharing this marvellous piece 10+++++++++ and A+++++ rgds asif
Very eloquent description of agony.....The whole poem has been ingrained with real holy emotions of sorrows...... depiction of love for your mother in good melancholic lines is worth readin......10/10
Really a beautiful read Xoubiya, well composed and a faest for the reader.. Thanks for sharing...
god chose woman to share part of his pain, xoubiya...