gar mez se thokar khaker chot mujhe lag jaati thi,,,
tu aakar mez ko daant lagati thi,,
ab jab kabhi chot lag jaati hai,,
or dawa lagaane tu nahi aati hai...
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.mother is the greatest gift of almighty....beautiful tribute......
Hi shrdhha ji aapki kabita me aapke naam jaise maa ki parti shradhha mehesush ho raha he
Oh How sweet this one I really appreciate your tender feels Mother always the greatest inspiration You can Read The Place Of My Dreams About mother Thanks for visit and comments
Ye kavita bahut achi hei, beti. likhiye...thumara pyar bahut hei.
Are these works available in english? Thanks for sharing my friend.
Many many happy returns and a very happy birth day to your mother......Sharaddha... and may God bless you to compose as many as good poems like Maa Tuu Yaad Aati Hai..........very very inspiring...a must 10
God could not stay everywhere in this earth. Therefore he created mother for us: -Bible... No body can take mother's place....It my pleasure to go through such wonderful ink! Good job. Thank you.
Nicely done Sharddha, Seems to be truthful and innocent. Words that came out from heart I think! keep going...
So nice a poem-cum-song on Mother. The being and touch of mother is really the God's hand on your head. So nice
A very touching poem indeed from your pen Shraddha.... Very true said, mother is an inspiration in our life, no love can replace mothers love...loved it...
there is no substitute of mother. maa to sada mere saath hai. meri har saanso mein. meri ek bangla kavita hai 'Mother's affection.try to read n understand.
a very touching poem.. no one can replace the joy of mother's love.. beautiful poem..
it was very touchy shraddha really.. Who can understand it better than me: ( every line made me to feel my own mamma..... Its a beautiful poem in the memory of a mother..me too miss my mamma
Mother is our true goddess who is ours and with us always. very fine.
An emotional poem indeed.Mother is the sweetest word in this world.
maaa tb tu bahot yaad aati hai.... bahut sanwsenshil bhavnaa...10 maa tu yaadhi nahi aati par rula bi jaati ho aansu tghamte nahi or fir yaad dilaa jati ho
ab ankhein neend se nhi aansuon se bhar jaati hai intensely moving!