Sunday, January 19, 2014

Maa (Mother) Comments

Rating: 3.9

Maa teri zaat be misaal hai
Teri har ik adaa mein kamaal hai

Mamta ka mujasma hai tu
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Hira Akhtar
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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2014

Man ki duaen lo, Bap ki narazgi se bacho, Mustaqbil tumhara haiy.

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Meena Mustafa 01 March 2014

A beautiful poem :) no one can take the place of a mother. Thanks for sharing

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Bright Morn 09 February 2014

a very good attempt hira. ba'az jaga p rhythm toot raha he but over all buht achi poem he. keep it up

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Shraddha The Poetess 31 January 2014

beautiful maaaaaaaa k bare m jitna likho kam hai..................... vryyyyy nice.... invite u to read mine....

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 January 2014

beautiful tribute to maa.no one is as beautiful as mother.so nice.

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Usman Arshad 25 January 2014

Excellent poem keep it up

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Shahzia Batool 19 January 2014

Hira, as your first attempt, this is simply great...i don't see what is the high language, you need to be expressive which you already are...these are the couplets in urdu, and if you keep writing you'll see your refinement yourself...

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