Maa (Mother) Comments

Man ki duaen lo, Bap ki narazgi se bacho, Mustaqbil tumhara haiy.

A beautiful poem :) no one can take the place of a mother. Thanks for sharing

a very good attempt hira. ba'az jaga p rhythm toot raha he but over all buht achi poem he. keep it up

beautiful maaaaaaaa k bare m jitna likho kam hai..................... vryyyyy nice.... invite u to read mine....

beautiful tribute to maa.no one is as beautiful as mother.so nice.

Excellent poem keep it up

Hira, as your first attempt, this is simply great...i don't see what is the high language, you need to be expressive which you already are...these are the couplets in urdu, and if you keep writing you'll see your refinement yourself...