Sunday, June 24, 2012

Maa, I Can'T Sleep Comments

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Maa, I can't sleep.
A pain crawls up my spine, the loneliness shouts aloud
And the abrupt commotions in my head
Keep me from closing my eyes,
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Shouvik Roy
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Karen Sinclair 01 July 2012

Lovely that even now you should turn to your mother for comfort and to relay your pains and fears...

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Indira Babbellapati 25 June 2012

a sensitive write............

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 24 June 2012

A good stir of emotion with apt words. A great job! Striking thought!

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Neela Nath Das 24 June 2012

Very sentimental.The pang of separation has bloomed as a nice poem.Good Luck!

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