Maa, I can't sleep.
A pain crawls up my spine, the loneliness shouts aloud
And the abrupt commotions in my head
Keep me from closing my eyes,
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A good stir of emotion with apt words. A great job! Striking thought!
Very sentimental.The pang of separation has bloomed as a nice poem.Good Luck!
Lovely that even now you should turn to your mother for comfort and to relay your pains and fears...