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Hey Niv If one reads between the lines-and opens up their mind-they will find -that the poem rhymes-and there is a message there every time..I found it different but good. Please read one of mine

Bah! Besh likhechhen. Teri kobijanam achha hoga. CLUE: Bah - Well in Bengali Besh - Good in Bengali likhechhen - You have written....in Bengali. Others are of Bengali-Hindi mixed language....a discourse. Regards, pranab 10

Im sorry but I do not know what to think about this poem. It is very original but it just doesn't make any sense to me.

Niv I am sorrry but I guess I am not a very good poet and very obtuse, because I do not understand it at all. I am so sorry I wish I could.

It was like a most beautiful painting of my imagination. gr8.

Congratulations, your trolliing for comments seems to have paid off. Personally, I didn't like the poem. Sorry.

refreshingly original, and yes, poetry comes from the deepest recesses of the human soul...it is impossible to categorise, for the criteria would have to be as numerous, and as diverse....thank you for this great piece :)

So much going on with this poem. I like the way you are challenging view points and also creating poetry in various forms. There is much to thinking about with each line...so thought provoking.

I am so sorry I must be very ignorant, but I do not understand it at all, and it does not seem like poetry.

Sometime a mixture of strange words makes one beautiful poem like a bouquet of assorted flowers.

Different style, different rhyme, different theme. A very different poem.

Niv: I have no idea what this poem is about, however, like Bert I beleive you enjoyed writing it, and I think I enjoyed in my attempt to read it. Good work, I think.

Niv: I have no idea what this poem is about, however, like Bert I beleive you enjoyed writing it, and I think I enjoyed in my attempt to read it. Good work, I think.

Another juxtapose of words from lots of lands put together in your own initiative style...more like a clever romp of modern art...can't help enjoying it putting the meanings together..10/10 regards