Tuesday, August 16, 2011

Mistaken Identity Comments

Rating: 4.8

Forgive me, I thought somebody cared,
I thought it was you
Or I would surely never dared
Reveal myself through
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Romeo Della Valle
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Brian Jani 15 June 2014

A very creative poem

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 August 2011

Wearing an angelical smile And with sparkling eyes Superb write...Well done!

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Joseph Juarez 23 August 2011

Disappointed now I am But with faith and hope I will eventually survive And see a brighter light. One sunny day While the butterflies dance And the birds happily sing, I shall find you my angel, The woman of my dream i love that part i relate 100% very well written poem

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Efran Menny 21 August 2011

Well written poem you summarized my last relationship i love the meaning and i love the honesty Great poem sir

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Nisha- Butterflydreams 19 August 2011

This poem relates so much to my feelings... pulls us into the deceitfulness of a betraying lover :) The flow was pleasant, very soothing as if its painted on canvas :) Rated it 10+++... thanks honorable poet... please keep writing and keep sharing :)

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Ms. Queenie 18 August 2011

An ageless poem, reminiscent of Pablo Neruda with the way love is combined with deeper meaning and almost sorrowful and longing thought. Very good. sorry I can't comment on them all, haha. -Ms. Queenie

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