Forgive me, I thought somebody cared,
I thought it was you
Or I would surely never dared
Reveal myself through
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Wearing an angelical smile And with sparkling eyes Superb write...Well done!
Disappointed now I am But with faith and hope I will eventually survive And see a brighter light. One sunny day While the butterflies dance And the birds happily sing, I shall find you my angel, The woman of my dream i love that part i relate 100% very well written poem
Well written poem you summarized my last relationship i love the meaning and i love the honesty Great poem sir
This poem relates so much to my feelings... pulls us into the deceitfulness of a betraying lover :) The flow was pleasant, very soothing as if its painted on canvas :) Rated it 10+++... thanks honorable poet... please keep writing and keep sharing :)
An ageless poem, reminiscent of Pablo Neruda with the way love is combined with deeper meaning and almost sorrowful and longing thought. Very good. sorry I can't comment on them all, haha. -Ms. Queenie
A very creative poem