Tuesday, April 16, 2013

M.O.N.E.Y Comments

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M.o.n.e.y
A five letter word
But it is a devil’s sword
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Valsa George 21 May 2013

Unfortunately people think that with money they can buy anything they want! But it is like salt water to the thirsty! The more they get, the more they want! In the end, it becomes our master and we are doomed! Love, as you have said is the panacea to all ills of mankind! !

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Kanav Justa 20 May 2013

the more we have, , , , more the trouble, , ,

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 May 2013

'Sometimes it is everything nd some other times nothing with everything.Great write for the Feelings associated.

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Captain Cur 30 April 2013

It all boils down to happiness. People continue to believe money will make them happy and fulfilled. But it is never enough, because it does not work. So the cycle continues, to greater and greater excess. As you closed your argument, love can be the only true answer.

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A Dark Lifetime . 25 April 2013

Dear God what an amaaazing poem! ! ! The rhymes, the meaning, the melody.. Im speechless! ! You are absolutely right! People do go insane. And I love it how you got the whole world in this poem. Not just any person but from men to women to politician. Amazing! The best one of yours and absolutely one of my favorite!

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Unwritten Soul 16 April 2013

Poet Nader, its right Money is reverse to Honey, if honey is the healer, money could be the thriller...it can break loose heart to be unshaped, it can make life twisted...even it just a paper, but it has power...i dont deny we need money, but to survive..to obsess we are blinding our heart to feel what life is for....because it blind other eyes what honey is....nicely written, rhymed well! _Soul

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