Tuesday, October 23, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

I got the shots
Promised to take the pills
Malaria
Or whatever they said
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Tsunami Hs 24 October 2012

Thank you Karen. I'm so glad my poem made you remember you're trip. I based it on my own trip to Tanzania when I was 9.

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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2012

I adore this as it reminds me of my most amazing 10 days of my life when i visited kenya, and the old goat herder who walked past us all in white and gave me the most beautiful memory i will cherish forever, his smile, i dont think i ever saw a more genuine smile which glistened in my life... i liked how you used jambo as a name instead of a greeting, i cannot stop smiling now as i can smell the lovely sweet musky sea air and hear the crickets...tyvm karen

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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2012

I adore this as it reminds me of my most amazing 10 days of my life when i visited kenya, and the old goat herder who walked past us all in white and gave me the most beautiful memory i will cherish forever, his smile, i dont think i ever saw a more genuine smile which glistened in my life... i liked how you used jambo as a name instead of a greeting, i cannot stop smiling now as i can smell the lovely sweet musky sea air and hear the crickets...tyvm karen

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