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another great poem from tanvi, this one makes me feel good!

its great! ! i love it! its great, thats so true and god put on this earth for a reason and you put that into your poem!

ooh, Tanvi. bravo. i loved it, very motivational and oh so flowy. great job.

Tanvi I absolutely loved it! It was as if you knew what i was going through I wish my words flew across the page like that.. if only, if only Thank you Dear

.......motivating, tanvi!

Yes Tanvi, we need the spark to ignite our engine of life.Good writes bro.

there are many metaphores in this poem i like it a lot.

thats is agreat poem there is some really awesome lines in there, and i love the message, if you write everything like this your doing well =)

Being a poet u must feel proud with this piece of work keep writting

A very moving motivational poem. keep writing.

Well done. A good philosophy for living.

What a positive outlook highlighted in this poem! A practical advice towards the road for a successful living indeed.

i love the enthusiasm and effort that comes from this poem great write

From the beginning to the end I was speechless and the concept was awesome 10+

' Make some cookies, make some tea, Make a date with destiny '............. .........these lines were simply superb.........loved t.....sebastine...10+........

i like how every last word at the end of the sentence rhymes with the next line. that is very hard to do with poetry

YaY! this poem has a spark, and her name is Tanvi : }

learn to live the excitements of the present... a wise and nice way of approach towards life...good message you give, Tanvi...mature beyond your age...10 cookies

Poem has a lot of inspiration and spirit

Oh human groping in the dark Wake up! You are the divine spark......................... Good ideas woven into a poem.................