Monday, December 22, 2008

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Rating: 3.7

Don't say you're not important, it simply isn't true,
The fact that you were born, is proof that God has a plan for you.
Live your life not because you need to but because you want to,
For once don't think of others think of you.
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tanvi damle
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Peter Strugnell 23 January 2010

another great poem from tanvi, this one makes me feel good!

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Kallie Madison 15 January 2009

its great! ! i love it! its great, thats so true and god put on this earth for a reason and you put that into your poem!

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May Namoc 05 January 2009

ooh, Tanvi. bravo. i loved it, very motivational and oh so flowy. great job.

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Libbie Jones 05 January 2009

Tanvi I absolutely loved it! It was as if you knew what i was going through I wish my words flew across the page like that.. if only, if only Thank you Dear

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Indira Babbellapati 31 December 2008

.......motivating, tanvi!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 December 2008

Yes Tanvi, we need the spark to ignite our engine of life.Good writes bro.

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

there are many metaphores in this poem i like it a lot.

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Andrew Rose 25 December 2008

thats is agreat poem there is some really awesome lines in there, and i love the message, if you write everything like this your doing well =)

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Yaseen Anwer 25 December 2008

Being a poet u must feel proud with this piece of work keep writting

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A very moving motivational poem. keep writing.

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Tom Golding 23 December 2008

Well done. A good philosophy for living.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 23 December 2008

What a positive outlook highlighted in this poem! A practical advice towards the road for a successful living indeed.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 23 December 2008

i love the enthusiasm and effort that comes from this poem great write

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From the beginning to the end I was speechless and the concept was awesome 10+

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Sebastine Humaemo 23 December 2008

' Make some cookies, make some tea, Make a date with destiny '............. .........these lines were simply superb.........loved t.....sebastine...10+........

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Imogen Brand 23 December 2008

i like how every last word at the end of the sentence rhymes with the next line. that is very hard to do with poetry

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**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 23 December 2008

YaY! this poem has a spark, and her name is Tanvi : }

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2008

learn to live the excitements of the present... a wise and nice way of approach towards life...good message you give, Tanvi...mature beyond your age...10 cookies

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Joseph Poewhit 23 December 2008

Poem has a lot of inspiration and spirit

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 December 2008

Oh human groping in the dark Wake up! You are the divine spark......................... Good ideas woven into a poem.................

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