Friday, July 3, 2009

M.J.'s Jackson Three Comments

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they say that we're not your sons
but in your heart, we're the only ones.
you raised us from our birth
and gave us your heart and all its worth.
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Kranthi Pothineni 04 July 2009

Nice one. Liked the way you expressed the hope. Good one.

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this is good.............. poetry................ hopefully.............he is.........in.............heaven.

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it would happen the three would have it in them...the magic the legend had....well written

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Christine Kerr 03 July 2009

Thinking ahead.....We will be the Jackson Three, Yep can see it happening. No doubt his story won't stop in this aria and his kids will always be in the public eye unless his mother who now has custody, will do something about it. It would be nice to hear that they have a normal life, then pursue in music if that is what they want to do. Nice thoughts and well done once again Louis.10+++

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Ahtivah Lawton 03 July 2009

that was a hot poem..good job

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Heather S 03 July 2009

i do hope than one of michaels kids have his talent so that the jackson name lives on in them.his kids would feel lost without him as i am still today his music has touched all of our hearts and he will be missed dearly RIP Michael Jackson

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