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You are very right. You cannot count all stars or become like all stars at a time. This is nice to become a moon! This is nice to become a tree rather than leaves. You are clever enough to express your wonderful philosophical thought. You have your own freedom and you should sing openly soul's song what your inner core signifies! Excellent poem is well penned...5 stars!

Kya khoob translate kiya hai apni hi kavita ka. Maja aa gaya Janab Asim.