Tuesday, November 13, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

You are so perfect
You seduce me.
You are my Venus of the Mind
I breathe you in
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Fred Babbin
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Richard Blanch 14 September 2008

Wonderful and hard-wrought simplicity.

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William Jackson 25 November 2007

I have trapped the memory of my own Margarets in my mind for eternity. I understand what you mean exactly. Great poem!

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Fred Babbin

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