Friday, August 17, 2007

Lying To Your Best Choice? Comments

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I know when you're lying.
Because blunt weight hits my chest,
I hate you, even if you hate to see me crying,
for throwing me another ball to juggle for you,
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Delilah Miller
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Marci Made 17 August 2007

'I know when you're lying because blunt weight hits my chest! ! ' Out of the mouth of the young, deep thought and expression in here...I love that line and the last line and the entire poem.You may still be young Colette, but you excel in expressing your feelings, emotions...Keep at it.I started young also twelve through teens and then just sort of stopped until February except for personal ones for birthdays and special occassions and stuff. Just don't stop as you're on the right course..~~~marci. :) ~~~

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