Lying On My Back… Comments

Your philosophy and wit is remarkable and complete. arya

haha......well said! !

Imagination at its poetic best Kesav....you make a simple poem on a dream take the reader far away.......

keshavji, you are the polar star of poetry..........

very well written.. your poem can tell in very few words what can't be conveyed in hundreds of words by others and that's poetical triumph.

Great imagery. Very surreal.

A period between slumber and aware Not emphasising on reality and fantasy One is sure to go for Northern Sun and Moon. Such is a dream, so lovely, one can really beam Who can stop you dear poet, go into that trance and be calm Northern Sun will dance surely on your palm. Impossible is made possible in dream... Then... why not to take a shot? Lovely read, dear poet.

'Can anyone ever pick out a northerly sun? ' is what I implied there meaning never. Your suggestion is okay with me. Well, if the implication lacks clarity, I am changing the accent there from interrogative to affirmative. Thanks for your suggestion, Ronald Kesav Easwaran

I like poems about dreams. The dream with a star is very important. it speaks of the realms of the spirit. One line gave me a bit of trouble. Pick out a northerly sun, ever one can? do you mean to say (everyone can?) or (if ever one can?) but it might be better said (if anyone can?) It just a bit unclear what you are attempting to say right there in that phrase. a poet friend RH Peat

a lovely poem...light hearted humorous...a good flow...truly relaxing...great craft

This poems makes one ponder.... well written

lying on your back and watching the night sky, you travel in a world of magic, transcend the humdrum of daily existence and gain insight through inner reflections and self realization. nothing teaches like nature, as you have expressed in this poem with a touch of humour. human follies and foilbles... 10 Mamta

Very descriptive Kesav as you lie on your back and look at the sky. I also enjoyed the humor and hope you had wonderful dreams that night. 10 love Karin

Even at that drowsy moment you were able to be poetic...wonderful...a neat poem with a dash of humour...you always excel in the lighter side of life to amuse the reader....thank you

Listen to the lonely stars, they have learnt wisdom by meditations in secluded spheres. Very beautiful poem! 10 even if you don't care!

The star laughs an’ tells me: You foolish man! Pick out a northerly sun, ever one can? . a good write...a meaningful poem.../ a northerly sun/... Thanks..

the thoughts r quite sweet n funny... very relaxing piece...

Bring back to memory the enchanting sky that opens the doors of imagination. A meanigful chat with northern star and a promise... Star of night is right that you need to relax and sleep till the star of the day comes and proclaims, a deep write, wrapped in ordinary words! Thanks!

A relaxing moment...lying on your back...got the imaginative thoughts and created a meaningful poem...a simile... make a sunshine in your life....10

laying on my back......... very nice write speaking with the star............well crafted.........