Sunday, May 17, 2009

Lying Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

if you really loved me
you would not only say it
but show it
but all I hear is the flat lie
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Jessica Caswell
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Shashendra Amalshan 04 June 2009

you could v told him in a poetic riddle...filled with emotions...nice one 10 with love shan

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Dans Only 24 May 2009

I really liked this one. Superb finish.

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Kyrsten Gaddis 22 May 2009

lololol sorta like my one poem....'If you love me'....i think it's like that one....like one of 'em anyway

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Aleksandra Lachut 21 May 2009

Very expressive poem about someone that you loved but the love was not true it was lying love that he was always lying to you and hurting you. Thank you.

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Jazz Annis 17 May 2009

that was a real expressive poem...loved it! !

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