Tuesday, August 22, 2006

Lying Dying Comments

Rating: 5.0

His low moans bounce off the walls of the alley,
echoing in the darkness. The rays of the streetlight
stray close, but never close enough.
Puddles redden as he drains by the minute,
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Dan Brown
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Francesca Johnson 22 August 2006

A piece of raw, realistic writing here, Dan. Sordid, up-the-dark-alley stuff. Well written. Love, Fran xx

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