Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Lying Dead In A Closed Minded Existence... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see a broken boy who’s confused about what’s real and fake.
He wanders if when he dies if he will actually wake.
He cries out for love, but finds that no one will answer his prayer.
Because he never faced the reality that there was no one ever there.
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Steven Hoon
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<font color =fusha>Amy 15 April 2009

amazing piece i thoroughly enjoyed it

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Beth Whittaker 11 February 2009

intriguing title, it has a clear and familiar meaning

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Rani Turton 11 February 2009

Existence and all it's questions...gifted artists and poets have often asked these questions anf felt alone. You must be one of them, Steven.

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