Monday, July 27, 2009

Lying! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’ve found out the truth
Why did you lie?
I read the message
And just had to cry
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Jaye Jacobs
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Jaye Jacobs 31 July 2009

thankyou for all the nice comments.

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this is AWESOME.finding out that the one u love loves someone else while dating u at the same time this comes from the heart 10+++

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Lynda Robson 28 July 2009

A good read, written from the heart, and if I was you I'd dump him, 10 Lynda

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Ronald Doku 27 July 2009

this poem was really worth reading. great thoughts Jaye. awesome piece

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Afzal Shauq 27 July 2009

Just go be with her And leave me behind It’s not like you care I’m sure you wouldn’t mind means he is not fair to you and cheating... better to let or realize him that he is doing wrong..I like your heartiest expression and can feel pain of heart..these love has changed meaning I think..and people jump form one to other within no time..it is a good and impressive poem..liked it 10/10

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Jaye Jacobs

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