Thursday, March 6, 2008

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Life has it's up's, life has it's downs.

Sometimes there is happiness, sometimes there is frowns....
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Kelvin Owusu 16 January 2013

a nice poem, life is everything good bad ugly, with a positive mind life is bright regardless the struggles, good write

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Kelvin Owusu 16 January 2013

a nice poem, life is everything good bad ugly, with a positive mind life is bright regardless the struggles, good write

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Vipins Puthooran 25 October 2012

understanding of life itself is life/ good poem! ! ! !

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Poet Of The River 21 February 2012

wow. very well written. you look at more than just what is in fornt of you. that will make you a great writer in the future :)

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Sylva Portoian 09 November 2011

You understood life... early I think you are young... But your style is fair... You will proceed fast And understand life more... Till you reach my age... Wishing you health...wealth...happiness... As you run... stepping on grass and rocks

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

life is ups and downs.........depend on how you look at it.........

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