Tuesday, December 23, 2008

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I walk peacfully in the hallways with my head down.
My head slowly lifts to glance at the world around
Taking my eyes off the patterned floor for one second
My eyes head for another pair of eyes
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Keith Hendrickson 16 January 2009

another great piece. ''she prtended as if she was full of joy but my eyes read her well, deep inside she had been destroyed'' great lines. keep up the good work.

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