Luvze Poem by Lost Soul

Luvze



I walk peacfully in the hallways with my head down.
My head slowly lifts to glance at the world around
Taking my eyes off the patterned floor for one second
My eyes head for another pair of eyes
Her attraction drew me to her hazel eyes that would glow at night
The feeling in my heart was deceiving; It was like if i knew her
She swayed like beautifull daffodils sway to the music of the wind
She pretended as if she was full of joy
But my eyes red her well, deep inside she had been destroyed
As our eyes entwined, my heart was slowly healing
She scanned me as if she knew the pain i had been feeling
As my steps grew closer to her, my legs became weak
All of a sudden my heart lifted, as if it had found what it had seeked

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 16 January 2009

another great piece. ''she prtended as if she was full of joy but my eyes read her well, deep inside she had been destroyed'' great lines. keep up the good work.

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