Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Lust Of The Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

From quite a short distance
I could feel her warm temperance
and when she came closer,
I felt her tender embrace
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Lubinda Lubinda
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 31 October 2015

Verily, the hard slap was really a deserving one Loved reading it...10

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Lubinda Lubinda 31 October 2015

True, the slap was to bring the guy back to reality, sometimes as guys read more into the casual things women do and end up interpreting their intentions, thanx for the comment!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

Well descritive poem on love. Read your poet's note too. Heart touching one. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Lubinda Lubinda 15 October 2015

Thanx for the comment!

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