Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Lust Of Hunger Comments

Rating: 4.7

Tho' you crush the fang
Of an erratic, cunning cub,
Wandering in shadow
Trickling spittle for blood,
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Pari Dharawat 19 November 2011

7 Powerful lines that depicts jungle rule graphically. thats just great, I must say. wonderfully written

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Malaya Roses 30 September 2011

Wildest way of surviving but what's fated can't be undone.... Some life need to be sacrificed to feed other but beast will remain as a beast and we are human should learn how to be human....! ! ! Excellent poem! ! ! ! !

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Stefanie Fontker 29 September 2011

Very primal emotions here, I love the expression and execution of it all. Beautiful write.

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Spiritual Seeker 28 September 2011

Beautifully written...the bones can be broken, but the soul will remain free! Thnx for sharing. Kindly read my poem ''Beast''.

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