Lust, Lust, Lust Comments

The poetry so fine and good, in prose it never would have so greatly stood. Erotic poem, without being vulgar but with great originality and fine thunder

Beautifully sensual. Enjoyed this revisit.

Lust with no love to emancipate it from its nonchalance is tragic, leaves you un-sated and incomplete. Good poem

Lust, with no love to augment at beatify

, , Lost in focus Lost in defense Can’t do his job Till he scores once more Now humble, no longer hardcore Only suffering from hangover great write great expression great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

definatly wasn't wordsworth but really made my day and thats really wat poetry is about

apple breast? kinda weird. but whatev.

i love the flow to your poem..and its so real

I loved your poem, excellent job!

This poem of yours has given me the biggest grin today Sylvia. You do have a wonderfully insightful way with words. 10 from lusty apple flavour Tai

Clever, insightful, well-imaged, sharp word play - a super poem. Kind regards, Gina.