Thursday, August 27, 2020

Lust Is A Divine Flame Comments

Rating: 3.5

No teenager is holy.
No teenager is saint.
Every teen, male or female
Fightsthe hormones of lust.
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Suresh Kumar Ek 12 September 2020

is a devine power, POetically powerful

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 September 2020

(.......) Teenager comes as lover/beloved But loses own sense in its dark flame well Cause of naturalness in its allurement Teenager finds not here crime, feels not guiltiness Cause of naturalness in its enticement That’s a disease of youthful biology That’s the Iust………L-U-S-T

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 September 2020

Flame, burning flame Not of the furnace Not of the scorching summer sun Not of the lava mountain The flame is youthful age The burning flame is juvenile biological time It burns inside the heart It instigates the biological demand It shows the path to douse the fire flame (.........)

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 September 2020

Iust is not a crime, a sin, a disease, a flaw or a shame. Iust is a thing of pride. Iust is our human nature. Iust is a gift of our God....fantastic writing; nice dedication to teenagers; Iust is also an inner feelings like the love but in love the feelings come through imperceptible notion function where the Iust comes as the biological sense instigator; yeah you can say it disease, madness, shame of little time; superb writings; congrats for being selected this poem as POD...10+

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 September 2020

Well crafted and the truth spelt out candidly 10++++

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Suzon Albert 01 September 2020

Bold poem. Though one should learn to control thier nerves and get married at early age to avoid sins.

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2020

Bold poem with an interesting topic, It takes courage ton write on such a bold topic, It is a taboo. Such things are not discussed out of shame, fear or decency. We all are blessed with nerves and it all makes a difference and those who have control over their nerves, they overcome this shortcoming rest all fall from the grace and commit sins. Psychologist calls it a disease, and we all deal with it in our own ways. Thought Provoking poem.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 September 2020

Illegal on earth! ! Muse of mankind on earth! Ways and means, Teenagers in focus. Thanks for sharing this poem to us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 September 2020

Humans are strange beings. We laugh at ourselves: Our hormones, our nature, Our needs andour deeds. But can lead us to do deeds that is evil. thank you dear poet. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2020

Sexual urge is okay, but '' is not. is animalistic instinct, devoid of love.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2020

3) OOPS, SO VERY SORRY, this is The Member Poem Of Tghe Day, CONGRATULATIONS! The title gripped me and so I started giving this fascinating poem my response and had not discovered that this excellent poem is the MPOTD! I have given my votes and marks. I have read this with greatest pleasure

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2020

2) 2) then this teenager can throw his arrow wherever he wants, no one would be victim and he'll feel no regret, shame nor fame. Then we can say: he is a good boy who is able to play with his toy. Each person has the right to use his tool with control and will never regret. It depends on the stage of thinking. I have enjoyed your excellent thought-out poetry Happy that I came across this poetry sublimest this Dutch Morn A 10 Full Score

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2020

Most mesmerizing poem. L.U.S.T. is indeed never a shame, we despite no teenagers anymore have it still and we utter that as subtilest through our poetry, BUT l.u.s, t. must be learned to be accompanied by love or ratio, just a little bit, then that would be perfect,

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 September 2020

Beautiful poem for beautiful teenagers. What God creates let no man shun.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 August 2020

some last lines of this poem on the Iust is quite expressive; really it's wondering me that the title of this poem " Iust is a divine flame! " - superb thoughtful

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