Discontented heart and a restless soul,
unaware i was of my goals.
Alcohol, cocaine, hashish and grass
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‘…My mother's palm gently stroking my forehead./I was surrounded by moist eyes…’ Just one 3 words ‘VICTORY UNTO MOTHER….’ ] 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
this poem throws up some very pertinent question related to life...
'Grappling with questions, i gave in to the temptation' Rachel Ann Butler
Excellent poem as always, ur poems are few bt meaningful & full of deep thoughts, I jus love reading it10++.Keep writing, Dear!
awesome explanantion abt addiction and distractions in life...voted 10 : D
i just love ur writing skill. whatever u write u bring life to it. donno why u took so long to take the best out of u.
Don't you think and feel now that thas experience... helped you to find the way to youself, I myself had a friend.. he didn't sucseed... may God bless you, A great poem, thank you.
Siddharth Jii, I lost in your poem Lust for Life. Thank you for pious effort in creating this fine piece of art Your poem has opened my eyes and i wish this be eye opener for many more. I give u 10++. if u have time please do read mine too and share ur words to me.
Very powerful write. Frightening in its intensity! I'm thankful every day of my life that I do not know the world of drugs, and find it heartbreaking to read things such as your poem that enlighten me as to the horrible place the world of addiction to drugs is! Great job! Anna
Lust for life, what is life? Breaking free, It is not about me... It is not about me... Life is not about me... After i realized this.. I finally began life.
its said that a good poem is never completed, its abandoned. very profound in nature, you seems to progress with every new poem.. with lots of love and luck...10++++++ Preeti
very meaningful...a self-awakening.. an eye-opener piece... it sends a great message I like this piece..very wholesome 10+++ lovelots, Maia
So many are tempted by the false glitter of the drug induced world; but the true gold is found with those who love you. A well written, thought provoking piece. Well done. Irene
excellent poem, well penned with deep thoughts, nice rhymes.........10++
wow.. this is written with lots of emotions indeed siddharth.. I have to say to you every one goes through these kind of patches through life.. you have talent and you do write good, use that gift to make a mark in the world! ! ! ! 10+++++ with lovess shan
I think that is one of the most profound pieces of poetry I have read in ages. It is hard to belive that a poet can encompass that much raw emotion in one work. Bravo
an excellent poem..truth with emotions and corage...lovely
Ammmmmmazing piece! remarkable wording! fine rhyme and rhythm! 10+
Little did i know, my ship struggling to dropp anchor drifted me away from the shore of my life. Being a recluse was no longer an excuse. Empathy, loath, rebuke, resentment in keeping me company, were all redundant. great write great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++