Friday, February 26, 2016

Lust And Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

Lust comes knocking down my door
While love just runs away.
Lust leaves me wanting more and more,
And lust seems here to stay.
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Michael Walker
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Chinedu Dike 11 December 2019

An insightful creation nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Your seeming effortless ease at embellishing your poems with poetic rhyme and rhythm, is not only appropriate but also poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 September 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of marriage. Thanks

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Darwin Henry Beuning 26 October 2016

Michael, So true for most, living in this plastic world. Another 10.

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Luc Leclaire 26 October 2016

Thanks, Darwin. I wish it weren't so, but c'est la vie. God bless.

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