..Lust.. A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins....... Comments

great command of vocabulary but again...just a one-sided, narrow minded viewpoint...

still a fan, very nicely done, Please read ' Need II' of mine als

very nice, Eyan an awakening piece... Lust...can cripple our soul.. I love your theme.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

nice read.......i liked the last lines the most.....others are equally good........ good one, , , , , ,

fantastic desires take our lives and are not we sensuous stall.........

cute, as usual... Luwi

i like how you said it.

very beautiful poem and very creative of you

This is a great piece Eyan...well structured and flows like a dream...I can't understand why it's been rated so low....keep up the great work....lovely to have you back

I like it! It goes through the different parts of LUST, describing to a point that you can almost feel it