Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Lust Comments

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I hear the words you say to me
I see the way you look at me
I know whats on your mind
At one time you were settled
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Kimberly Candace
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premji premji 25 November 2008

trust me I know a thing or two about 'earthly hells'.

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Colin Jeffery 06 November 2008

Such a very good poem on so many levels,

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Howard Johnson 15 October 2008

Excellent last stanza, a well penned piece.

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James Peters 15 October 2008

can feel the raw emotions, definately a classic. welldone

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