Tuesday, September 30, 2008

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You mezmorize
in every way
your eyes
draw me in
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uder pressure
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Neil Marsden 01 October 2008

Hi there, This is a very skillful little piece whose simplicity belies the intensity of the messages within, Written in such a way asd to present itself as captivating to the reader. Very well written! Neil.

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