Melissa Robinson

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Wednesday, January 1, 2014

Lust Comments

Rating: ★4.5

I stare into your eyes and I'm in a trance,
lets let go of innocence.
I am unable to hold myself back any longer,
I press myself against your lips.
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Melissa Robinson

cut innocence lust Lips

COMMENTS

Jennifer Colyne Hall 09 July 2015

Really good poem. I enjoyed it.

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 January 2015

nice lyric, Melissa. Short but poetically intense.

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Melissa Robinson 06 January 2014

Thank you for all the feedback on my poems.!

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Stan Petrovich 06 January 2014

Quite good for a short poem.

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Melissa Robinson 03 January 2014

Thank you, i love the positive criticism.!

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Lamont Palmer 01 January 2014

A very intense piece. I like the off-rhymes, instead of the exact rhymes; stick to those, or ideally, don't try to rhyme at all, but keep the tightness. Nice job, Melissa.

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