Lust Comments

Lovely piece of poetry depicting vain glorification of beauty; the raging fire of lust; the consequent suffering and pain. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Of course, as a guy, I had to start with this one! Very powerful write. You have much to say in this... even between the lines. Very discreptive and raw. Great Ink! ! ! -Kelly.

Lustful burning with vigour