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My heart is a sealed tomb
Harboring within its darkened catacomb
The remains of our passionate love
This old bronzed body
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verdigris lovely, natural design. good poem ted. i will keep on reading you.
You were correct, Ted...I do like it, and in fact, loved it. Your choice of words is...well...monumental, and it is truly a great love poem.
A great poem Ted. The language is beautiful and the way that you have constructed it makes the piece a real testement to you and your misses.
You may be a living monument to your love for your wife; here on Ph you're... well... simply monumental.... t x
What a wonderful testimony.... and though the beats move to memories... you have just delivered embronyic freshness xx
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8/21/2025 6:02:22 PM # 1.0.0
Wow quite a tribute to great love that lights an eternal flame.Beautiful-I gave you a ten.