Sunday, August 27, 2006

Lurkin' In My Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

He has no woman of his own
So every night he walks alone
Although he has no place to go
He's livin in a world so cold
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Leo Lopes
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Tahnee ? ? ? 11 October 2006

i really liked it... sad but so real... as kelly allan vinal said, sings like a sad song... you should consider maybe putting music to it ;) could be a good hit.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 28 August 2006

Sings like a sad song - outstanding work.

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Gabriella Franco 27 August 2006

oh my. this one hit me >>RIGHT HERE! << haha i love it! ! absolutely craving it! ! ! I'm going to have to read this one over and over.. *click* in the favorites folder...

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Mary Nagy 27 August 2006

Some people spend their lives searching for their happiness but I think it's the 'lurking in their lonliness' part that keeps them from finding it. I know many people this poem fits well. Great one. Sincerely, mary

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