Sunday, July 20, 2008

Lunch Poem #20 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oblivion, oblivion, hope of the damned.

Your dark waters lap incessantly at the
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Fay Slimm 27 August 2008

Another[ piece of exquisite wordsmithing Jim. Your choice of 'oblivion' being the hope of 'the damned' triggers the mood of the piece, and carries the reader through in the darkness with you. Fay.

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