Lunch Poem #11 Comments

The end line shoots into the heart. The pathos felt is very very strong. This is really great writing Jim.

Some say it is bad karma to kill oneself.. that it is ingratitude to parents .. who no matter how bad or good... have all sacrificed in some way to incarnate our bodies From what clairvoyants tell me, those who have killed themselves have not just a moment but a long time of regret... an infinite subject... God only knows? On another level, everything is perfect

Wow i like this poem its so deep. amazing how uve done it with such simple structure and wording.