Saturday, April 25, 2020

Lunch Is Ready Comments

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Next time when I visit you I shall not shake hands with you,
next time when I visit you I shall sit at a distance from you,
next time when I visit you I shall not be annoyed of your smoking,
next time when I visit you, no it's a fact, not at all am I joking,
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Mahtab Bangalee 07 May 2020

the corona time it reigns supreme well eat drink be merry but making distance bell cigarette! smoke inside kill the virus staying hide time is not old to play chess ready lunch timely bless

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2020

A lovely poem. The closure line resonates with me. A sweet and loving gesture of a wonderful mother. Nostalgic and touching.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 April 2020

yeah I am coming for lunch miss my mom but next lunch I am about to have mine now will u join my moms not here sir you know

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Khairul Ahsan 26 April 2020

'Lunch is ready' - what a sweet call! Felt nostalgic after reading the last line.

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