Lunatic Spasm Comments

Famine calls not only at night but also at day as my feminine prostitute wherever I've gone. //in this poem a lot of facts/ true matters of life// great poem penned

What a great thought provoking poem you have ever written; great

you have written just great poem on life and its aspects on the base of affectiveness by surroundings; fantastically written all true sceneries of life;

this is the poem where everything of life has been depicted superbly

what a great poem this is; splendid in thoughts

it's a fabulous poem; just stupendous poetic thought; too much thought provoking; live long your poetic genre

Wisdom-tooth of wiseacre takes birth in eye's/gesture and composes an epic century of/peace on nothing but a name............I absolutely agree with the statement! A beautiful poem....extremely well penned...10

Lots of frustration is reflected in this poem. With its unique images and imagination subject of human shortcoming and pitfalls are well depicted. Well done!

I mainly love to read than to write and here is my interest

Nuclear arsenal never be bargaining chip! Chop more deep, oh! Chop humanity deeply! not only humanity but they chop everything, greatly written for the sake of humanity, I love humanitarian poems, thank you, poet

Burned ashes forget to take the soul of phoenix, profound imagery expresses significant meaning

Zephyr comes after wind-storm but humanity comes with the destiny of shortcut death! ........ so humans do nothing for humanity? ...... great done, thanks for sharing

It is great to read this poem again!

Amazing to come up with such poignant words to follow up a single thought. It’s like literature, mythology, history and lexicology combined to express one reality. We must pick our lines to enjoy! The ruthless dance of life that we all have to watch.

it s nice poem because of it has discussed men suffered illness of the word

What a dearth of people can possess! A magnificent poem, Mahtab.

A perfect 10 for this wonderful poem.

The hidden face of humanity nicely exposed, Worth reading it and I recommend this poem to all atleast read it once. I quote: Questioners come and go, answers live in the asylum of mossy soul for shrewd slicker and barren usurer.

very nice but very long i read only upto 19 max lines and two words attract bees to honey like nakedness! and nudity and you r use is appropriate and lovely @ 32 I also did it oftenly thanks you often read and comment onmy poetry it makes be happy

A powerful poem with a nice universal message exposing human brutality.