Lunar Might Comments

Nice write on the eclipse.... as I think that is what you refer to in this poem...

For some reason I just didnt enjoy this poem as your other poems. Im not quite too sure why i lost my focus but, some of the metaphors were good some others were weak. BUT thats just in a teenagers opinion! !

astronomically true but religious myth do you believe in all this rituals of bath and dip in the holy sea? otherwise good write -10 anjali

Excellent..........inspirational for me........ awesome poem........; -)

Without considering the Hindu mythology; a nice poem, nikunj!

Excellent concept and told with flair..... well done 10 from Fay

A moment of pride and strength; when the whole universe shall see through; Me engulfing you....May your wish come true10+

this is really good....

very nice poem....significant simile of lunar mood...well penned...

There ya go! See? Kinda nice how fast you can work. I am glad you are so easy to work with. :) Deborah Cromer

I too, will have my day-Or I also will have my day-reads better than I shall too-I too shall have my day reads good....but because you use the word shall again in the very next line-shall is used too much, too soon. Just an idea or suggestion for you. Good poem, well written. Very powerful too. :) Deborah Cromer

Very brave. Cheers. Subroto

Well timed shot. Grate craftsmanship. CO

This is a beautiful one Nikunj! The timing of your poem is also great! 10+ -Raj Nandy

nice description of a lunar esclipse........ taking directly form nature..... you are a 'POET'

wow great imagery 10+++ great way to show how u feeling n its beautiful kept it up