Polished eyes mirror your
might Your glow; I come
only, As you go
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Yes, moon stole the thunder oops, light from the Sun. lunar might indeed. good one Mamta
it has the essence of poetry within. nice.
yeh so very true every moon has to have its day lovely poem dear Nikunj -10 anjali
'In a moment of pride; It’s my joyride Enough to say; every moon has its day'...yes, u r right..and everyday has a moon...
The first one was more detailed, i dont think it really needed a part two it was pretty good being a part one :) but this was as well thought out and written Nicely done
Very well crafted poem! I loved the beautiful flow of your words. Amazing.... Anna