Monday, December 29, 2008

Lunar Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

The moon shines upon her face.
Yet her glow shames all of space.
And i glance at her with haste.
For I am nervous that she notice that I am in daze
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Nathan Vu4
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May Obrien 30 October 2013

really nice job Nathan :)

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Joseph Poewhit 29 December 2008

Some women are hypnotic like that

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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

You've only started and yet your poems have a speciality that gives people pleasure to read them. A 10 for you. Keep up the good work!

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