Thursday, December 5, 2013

Lunar Influence Comments

Rating: 5.0

In moody silence, nursing my shallow bruises
I sat outside in the graying hours of the night
Staring into the cloudy night sky
With nothing to cheer my sullen spirit
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Valsa George
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fatemeh zolfagharian 18 July 2022

Wonderful.

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Michael Cochrane 17 July 2022

Good poem on the power of nature

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2019

Moody silence is nourished and heart feels the breezy movement. A new moment's birth is widely grown. We notice mind's landscape. This poem is very beautifully and excellently penned. Moon and its lunar effect we notice. This sharing is excellent one.10

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Akhtar Jawad 04 August 2015

Moon! Oh Sweet Moon, You don't spare anyone, Your influence is never undone! .......................10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 December 2014

Moonlight means sweet and subtle melody and infinite peace.......Valsa.......this is superb write with wonderful lines really brought peace of mind while reading this peace........10/10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 December 2014

Moonlight means sweet and subtle melody and infinite peace.......Valsa.......this is superb write with wonderful lines really brought peace of mind while reading this peace........10/10

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Muhammad Ali 01 January 2014

nice poem of a lonely mood. (i think lonely) : -) . best wishes.

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Shahzia Batool 09 December 2013

Moods are experienced by everyone...in all climes and culture...the reasons are many but here the focus is on LUNAR INFLUENCE! ! !

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Kee Thampi 09 December 2013

a poetry really made ripples on our heart........ I thought of a thousand smiles That kindles the universe The love that is hidden in all things Eclipsing all bitterness and curse I love it

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Ambrosia A 08 December 2013

Amazing. Moon is my favorite too, whether I am in sad mood or romantic, he never fails to muse me.

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Savita Tyagi 08 December 2013

Amazing. Moonrise will take all the sadness away from any body. But only you could describe the feelings of that moment so wonderfully. Enjoyed reading it so much. Thanks for sharing.

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As dark clouds part and reveal the moon And as the night Owl hoots a merry tune What can keep our minds from turning silent In such a rare a beautiful timeless moment... Very good poem Madam

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Rubab Atwal 08 December 2013

a beautiful poem, enjoyed it.

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Hazel Durham 08 December 2013

As the moon unfolds before your sullen eyes, it's shimmer full of hope and showing off it's beauty, to enchant and embrace your soul, to change your mindset as it smiles to lighten your heart. I love this superb write!

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Dee Corpolongo 07 December 2013

This is a beautiful poem and description of the moon and its magic....and thoughts that it may bring... I write about the moon often also....as well as the sun, and the trees, etc. Nature is astounding! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you for sharing.

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Valerie Dohren 07 December 2013

The moon can be bewitching and the source of great inspiration. A very imaginative and captivating write.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 December 2013

Ah i can so relate to the lunar influence, yor title itself attracted me as a lunar lover myself. But yor moonlit mindscaping wording n muse n crafting in metaphor left me overawed and enchanting as u penned it i was entranced. Just tday as i was swimmin in d ladies large pool i was gazing at d moon in broad daylight and so was fun readin yor poem. Hey smartie fav poetess, pls answer my riddle poem, im sure u cud do it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 December 2013

I too believe moon has influence on us and our thoughts too keeps on fluctuating like moons different phases. But to find a new rhythm in each and everything is really something great. Beautiful write. Loved it.

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R.benjamin Abate 07 December 2013

Very nice. It's important to find the Greatness in all things. Thanks.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 December 2013

A new moment was born And in the ceaseless beat of my heart I sensed a new rhythm a splendid sketch!

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