Glorious moon round and luminous
Upon the large canvas of black sky
A dark patch creeps in to cover
It on its side as I step out side
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A dark patch creeps in to cover It on its side as I step out side Like a gray thought arriving from No where to cover the jovial mind........... Love the comparison! Savita........Beautiful poem on the Lunar eclipse! Loved reading it!
A lovely imagery you have drawn on seeing the lunar eclipse. Your detailing was so good I felt as if I was seeing it physically.Further, you imagined a lot of facets with good omen and inspirations form that affected moon. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful narration. Thrilling expression. The favourite lines are.....A burning fire ignites their hearts For some its a new beginning Bringing hope and optimism For others a transfixed moment of Ravishing beauty in timeless cosmos A symbol of love and nurturing from Celestial gods. ... THanks for sharing.....10
We could not watch this extraordinary lunar eclipse in this part of the world. But no regrets. The poem has made it possible for us to not only have a glimpse of what it looked like but also what it meant to different people aesthetically or otherwise. Thanks for sharing. A beautiful quote: Ravishing beauty in timeless cosmos A symbol of love and nurturing from Celestial gods.
You have the wisdom not just to paint such a beautiful scene but to reveal as many impressions as there are phases to the lunar impression. Wonderfully, hauntingly extraordinary writing...10