Monday, July 18, 2016

Lunar Dance (Haiku) Comments

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ripples on the lake
reflect many dancing moons~~
will you be my date?
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Yuko Onishi 13 August 2016

The image is beautiful. I love the third line....will you be my date?

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 August 2016

ha ha, glad you like that.

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Jenny Straton 11 August 2016

just want to say, another beautiful haiku. You espouse show not just tell very well.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 August 2016

thanks Jenny. thats been drilled in to me from school.

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Spock The Vegan 28 July 2016

Simple, but effective. Thanks for sharing.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 30 July 2016

thank you Spock for your kind words.

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Paola Gianotti 28 July 2016

Oh! this is a beautiful haiku. I totally enjoyed the picture you have painted.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 28 July 2016

I am so glad you enjoyed it

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Mike Cohen 28 July 2016

What a wonderful Haiku! Govind, you make the reader share in your experience and that is simply terrific

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Govind Ramakrishnan 28 July 2016

Thank you sir. I try to do just that when I write haikus!

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Guru Kothandaraman 28 July 2016

Picture tells a thousand words. With thirteen, you've painted a wonderful image. Terrific Haiku.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 28 July 2016

thank you very much Guru!

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Gil Highlander 28 July 2016

Anothe vintage Haiku Govind. I loved the simplicity of words and the richness of the imagery. Well done!

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Govind Ramakrishnan 28 July 2016

i find that the simplest words can create the most beautiful images!

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Howard The Motivational Poet Simon 27 July 2016

So simple and significant my friend!

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Govind Ramakrishnan 28 July 2016

I appreciate your kind words sir

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Stephen Park 19 July 2016

simply beautiful, a perfect 10 Govind.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 28 July 2016

Thank you Stephen!

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Kelly Kurt 18 July 2016

I really like this one, Govind

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Govind Ramakrishnan 18 July 2016

thank you sir, i saw this reflection yesterday and it was beautiful, The moon was almost full,

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